Friday, April 24, 2009

Story contest

Story has been matted!!



I hope you all like this one! I gave credit to Mark but through my blog site if that ok with you dear?

8 comments:

  1. thats absolutley fine. thank you for publishing my story, it is my first but i have been thinking of starting my own captions blog up so may not be my last! thanks again laters x

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  2. also what did you think of my caption story?

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  3. I loved the dark twist to it. It was different, but really good at the same time.

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  4. Strange that his mom always wanted a girl and his sister helped.... seems like she had a girl!

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  5. i loved it Mark! I liked the part that I still havent lost my virginity to the girl I would like to. I liked the fact that it was taken away from me and now stuck in the body of a woman. Nice touch with the dark side of the story. I might try to do this again. Oh and the age that I am is a turn on. I love teenager stories where the guy is in school and turns into a hot little teenage girl! ^_^

    -Tina

    ps. Any more comments or suggestions??

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  6. That was great. I don't know what he would have to complain about. I'm jealous of him. Good caption.

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  7. thanks to the positive comments. and yes after it was published i realised my mistake, i had intended to say "Another daughter" sorry about that.

    yes i agree tina, late teen ones are always a turn on for me as well lol.

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